Thursday, July 14, 2011

Snort of Violence

This is one of my last translated poem about violence against women. It tells the story of a woman that was glowing like a star in the deep dark space. But a man brutally 'kissed' her.



Even this star
faded away,
even her light
wiped out
twirling.
Young woman
kissed eagerly



17 comments:

  1. That was pretty good. Did you write it?

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  2. me and Mauro are sharing this blog now.

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  3. That was pretty good, great writing!

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  4. Good, Mauro, that was very good. Please share more of these with us!

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  5. that was really deep and insightful. Keep it up man :)

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  6. Very deep poem... Please post more.!

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  7. The poem goes well along with the image. Another meaningfull moment!

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  8. Nice one mate, domestic violence is a cancer to the society. Keep it up!

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  9. the concept of age and youthfulness

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  10. Truly touching. Also, love your background

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  11. Thanks everyone for the moral support and the comment! I'm happy to see the people enjoy what I write and what I feel in my inner. Thanks again :)

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  12. Deep poem, keep up the good work!

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  13. great poem, makes me want to give my woman a black eye..

    wait what?

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  14. Mauro, please keep sharing this kind of things, it was really good :)

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