Friday, July 15, 2011

God's sin.

This poem is about God and his feeling about child killing. I don't believe in God or in any religion, but I think that if he really exists and looks like us, what he is going to feel when he kills a child?
I know this isn't an easy poem, but I hope you will enjoy it. Thanks for your time. 


   
God's sin.


At the graveyard
you will come,
by praying 
over petrified tears
of a God that became human,
you will shed yours
over his remorse.



9 comments:

  1. I'm trying to figure out that photo. unclear subject, but a nice complement to the lines

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  2. It made me sad. Never experienced the death of someone that young, but it must be very hard to understand.

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  3. Wow, that's quite deep. I don't believe in god too, so I do get where you're coming from

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  4. I will remember your name, so I can buy your books when you write them. :)
    Very emotive poem.

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  5. i dont believe in god either but if he existed I guess he'd felt the same for every creature he created. We Homo Sapiens are so selfish. Nice poem anyway, keep it up mate

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  6. What if people did not die though? what kind of world would it be without death?

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  7. Thanks you all! I appreciate your comments! keep it up :)

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  8. Wow... I don't know if I agree with all this, but it is certainly beautiful.

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